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Yep. So I just added the first addition. ...yep.Dragonfly Teacup Mountain"It is possible to store the mind with a million facts and still be entirely uneducated." - Alec Bourne"...I enjoy being the...
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I guess I'll describe the ACE then.An ACE is built to fit a pilot's body perfectly, like a very expensive buisness suit. ACEs have fore arms that are about 50% longer than a humans to allow for extra...
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I guess I was skipped 0.o So, I'll delete that one post.Dragonfly Teacup Mountain"If I ever got drunk and went streaking I'd be wearing socks and a smile." - Smurvis"...I enjoy being the man who...
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All I have to say is that you started off the story with:"It was dark--too dark. And it was quiet--too quiet."I couldn't bring myself to read further than that. No offense, but I hate those lines.If a...
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Just read the whole thing. Right now the story and its general layout reminds me a lot of Xenogears: a higher and lower hierarchy of society, one with advanced technology and the other more remedial....
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woah, TheHonorableRyuX seems to know what he's talking about...I think I'll try to give Lumus a more distinct personality in the future, and I was planning on having Ezra and crew stumble accross...
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MWAHA! *poses dramatically* I WIN! BOW BEFORE ME, MERE MORTALS! *cackles*EGO LEVEL....RISING. WARNING: DANGEROUSLY LARGE EGO.WAHAHAHA! LoL, actually, Torres is a character I've been developing for...
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Rick, sorry to hear that. Oh well.Ryu, thanks for the input. I tried to draw up a concept map, but some places haven't been distinguished very well. I'll try to work on it some more. As far as having...
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The problem I had with that was something Ryu also brought up. You can do a much better description of how dark and quiet it was that would go along with the story better. Those lines would work much...
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Then why didn't you just say that to begin with? Anyway, I suppose I could have written that better, but I don't think it's that important that I need to edit it or anything. Then again, maybe it is....
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BlackDeath, please take note of hte edit I made in your post in the Writing Thread. People can only call a spot if no one has done so, you can't make a 'line'. Since Gar-chan has this spot, she must...
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*kicks Pal in the shin*I win!yeah, I like how the story is going, good good!"Ego brain,Man made shame,Shame, Love after it rains,You see my pain is real,Watch my world dissolve,And pretend that none...
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Is anybody else going to write the collaberation? or is it dead?
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well, I replyed.It's been a long time since I've thought about this story, and had so many ideas for other stories that I had to go back and read everything from the beginning (well, most).It's short...
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Hey, I told you I was waiting for Cowgan and Illustrious Leader! I'm working on it! I promise!
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Pft. Excuses...I thought I'd give someone else a chance to add.That, so there!
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